Monday 16 July 2012

Today we wrote using a picture as a prompt and I was really pleased with the strong visual images created.

My heart sank as I saw my beloved home ablaze. I stood for a while as the fire leapt violently to other houses. Flames ran furiously from the window and quietly, lightly, the smoke crept into the air.
It was pitch black. My house was crackling and the fire was the only light I could see.
It was terrible.
Josh

Xia wrote-
My heart sank as I saw my beloved home ablaze. I dropped to my knees. The fire blazed from each wall. It hissed and danced like it wanted me to die.
I tried to look for a way out but it was so scorching.
The walls screamed. 
Well done room 5.

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